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The Magic Seeds ~ A Modern Day Fairy Tale Reviewed By Conny Crisalli of Bookpleasures.com
- By Conny Withay
- Published May 10, 2012
- Childrens & Young Adults
Conny Withay
Reviewer Conny Withay:Operating her own business in office management since 1991, Conny is an avid reader and volunteers with the elderly playing her designed The Write Word Game. A cum laude graduate with a degree in art living in the Pacific Northwest, she is married with two sons, two daughters-in-law, and three grandchildren.
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Authors: Teraab Ankhnu Feaster & Rochelle Campbell
Publisher: AuthorHouse
ISBN: 978-1-44900-784-3
Young seven year old Teraab, with the help of his mother, Rochelle, has written a charming, modern day fairy tale in a children’s book titled The Magic Seeds.
This thirty-three page
book has a soft cover of painted bright purple front and back with a
packet of seeds depicted on the front. On the back in white lettering
is a short description and history about the young author and reason
for the book.
Inside there are plenty of easy-to-read sized words on each left side of the page and a pastel/colored pencil drawing on the full page on the right side. The drawings are simplistic yet descriptive. There are three extra pages at the end of the book that are totally blank.
There was one noticeable
grammatical error on page two and several misspelled words written
for exclamation or purpose such as righhhtttt, waaaa-ho, or
pleeeezze. This may confuse a young reader in the correct spelling of
the normal word. Also, some words are italicized for emphasis, which
may cause some concern for a young reader. There are a few rather big
words such as “askew” and “immediately” that a young reader
may have trouble either understanding or reading aloud.
The story is about a
single mom who has an inquisitive son with a supposed imagined
friend. The son is given a choice to either take coins or some magic
seeds from this old lady that the mother never sees. The son tries to
tell his mother about the seeds but daily circumstances, being sent
to a neighbors and roller skating do not allow it. Later, with the
mother’s help, the boy plants the seeds in a pot and says magical
words. That night the seeds sprout into a large plant with colorful
diamonds hanging from its branches. Every time a diamond is plucked,
another one grows in its place. With this newfound financial gain,
the mother buys a house of her own and gets a puppy for her son. Of
course, they both live happily ever after.
Keeping in mind that a seven year old wrote this story with his mother’s help, it is cute, idyllic and exactly what any young, intuitive child would want to happen. However, in reading the “behind the scenes” story about why Teraab wrote it, there is more humanism and grace as he had found a toy “gem” and his mother and he bonded, wondering “what if” it actually was real.