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			<title><![CDATA[Are You In Need Of a Good Editor?]]></title>
			<link>https://www.bookpleasures.com/websitepublisher/articles/950/1/Are-You-In-Need-Of-a-Good-Editor/Page1.html</link>
			<description><![CDATA[<div style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-weight: bold;"><img title="" alt="" src="http://www.bookpleasures.com/websitepublisher/content_images/1/Deborah%20Owen.jpg" align="bottom" border="0" height="80" width="82"/><br/><br/>If you are in need of editing and/or
proofreading, Norm Goldman, Publisher & Editor of
Bookpleasures.com, highly recommends <br/><br/><br/>Deborah's Writing Service.
Deborah is the CEO & Founder ofÂ  </span><a style="font-weight: bold;"  href="http://www.creativewritinginstitute.com/">Creative Writing Institute</a><span style="font-weight: bold;"> -
a non-profit organization that awards writing scholarships to
cancer patients. In addition, Ms. Owen is a published author,
writing course developer, private writing tutor, proofreader and
editor.Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  </span><br style="font-weight: bold;"></div><div style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-weight: bold;"></span><br/></div><p dragover="true"><font size="3"><b>Deb can</b> <b>make you look good! At $35 an
hour her light editing  includes:</b></font>Â 
</p><ul type="disc"><li><p>Spell Check</p>
</li><li><p>Proofreading</p>
</li><li><p>Run-on sentences</p>
</li><li><p>Transition sentences</p>
</li><li><p>Blending of paragraphs</p>
</li><li><p>Separation intoÂ new paragraphs</p>
</li><li><p>Punctuation</p>
</li><li><p>Tense changes</p>
</li><li><p>Subject and verb agreement</p>
</li><li><p>Verbiage trim</p>
</li><li><p>Checking for open and closed quotes</p>
</li><li><p>Basic sentence structureÂ changes</p>
</li></ul>


<p><font style="color: rgb(0, 0, 153);" size="3"><b>Or you can have aÂ total rewrite for $60 an
hourÂ thatÂ willÂ includeÂ all of the above, plus
aÂ comprehensive, in-depth analysis that deals with the mechanics
of writing, such as:</b></font><font size="3"><br style="color: rgb(0, 0, 153);">Â </font></p>
<ul type="disc"><li><p>Filling out characters</p>
</li><li><p>Jazzing verbs</p>
</li><li><p>Change ofÂ dialogue</p>
</li><li><p>AdjustingÂ pace and tone</p>
</li><li><p>Timeline progressions</p>
</li><li><p>Flashback restructuring</p>
</li><li><p>Plot analysis</p>
</li><li><p>Theme</p>
</li><li><p>Re-titling chapters, if needed</p>
</li><li><p>Building climaxes</p>
</li><li><p>Forming proper resolutions</p>
</li></ul>


<p><b>In addition, she will check for sagging scenes and holes in the
development. The end result will be a well-organized workÂ that
will blendÂ into one cohesive unit, holding all of your ideas and
passions -Â but a lot of your words will change. Very few editors
offer this type of editing because it is very time consuming.</b>Â </p>

<p><b>This type of editing does more than polish. It makes your work
shine with all the things you were trying to say – but not in the
way you would say them. If you are attached to your words, this is
not the kind of editing you want.</b>Â </p>

<p><b><i><u>***Please Note</u></i><i>:</i>Â  Deb does not
guarantee that you will be able to sell your work. No editor will
guarantee that because it depends on more than the content.
SalesÂ hingeÂ on the market, agentÂ choice, timing,
persistence, and message of the manuscript.</b><br/>Â </p>
<p style="color: rgb(0, 0, 153);"><font size="3"><b>For terms, agreement and further information email Deb at: Â <a  href="mailto:bookpleasures@gmail.com">   bookpleasures@gmail.com</a></b></font></p>
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			<author>no@spam.com (Norm Goldman)</author>
			<pubDate><![CDATA[Wed, 08 Jul 2009 18:30:00 UTC]]></pubDate>
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